Rather hapless giving away a potential solution to a problem resp. quest you likely haven't even come across at this point just like that, wouldn't you agree?

thats definatly a bug, cause i try to solve it by loading older save and try to maje quest one more time.
not when I ask Yannick to take me to Haven, imidiatly starting cut scen with that guy which shoots me...

regarding your recommendation, both guardins there just standing they dont walk at all. Whom should i follow?

this bug not fixed for several month already...

Seems I discovered a bug that breaks the guard route. Which is quite bad given I skilled on one armed combat and strength. :(
In chapter 1 you can climb up the mountain west of the city and then drop down at the city church's waterfall, thereby getting into the city in a seemingly unintended way. I explored the city therefore in chapter 1(!), with a lot of weird results like merchants mostly having empty store inventories. But was able to leave the city again and for a while story continued normally. Until I in chapter 2 tried to join the guards. I talked to nameless guards and also all named guards, including the one that's supposed to test you for joining. But none of these talks started the joining quest or gave me any tasks to do in order to join. I guess that's due to me already talking to these characters in chapter 1, where joining was not meant to happen yet. :(

Missing the indefinite article before "poor man":
"...so kind to give a poor man a few coins?"

Should be "just" instead of "such":
"...it was just a little misunderstanding."


"Ripper" just being Ripper's name (and not his profession or an honorary title or something like that) would make the use of the definite article in front of it incorrect, should be:
"...my duel with Ripper."

You're welcome and thanks in return for your continued efforts in bugfixing and further improving/polishing, it's equally very much appreciated.

Missing the definite article:
"...in the Haven at the moment..."


Missing the definite article as well:
"...adding something hard to the meal?"


Singular "Fishing" requires "was", not "were":
"Fishing was good..."

Should be "sizeable":
"...to win a sizeable stack of gold."


It's "any other" instead of "another":
"Do you have any other business?"


I believe a better way to put it would be:
"If you get any more inquisitive, we'll hunt you too."

Maybe it's just me but "dude" is a way too modern sounding term that's not fitting the European medieval-inspired setting of the Gothic universe at all. I'd go for "bub" instead, which also comes across a little more threatening/warningly than the too friendly "dude":
"Okay, bub."


Should be plural "deckhands" and "it", since that refers to the aforementioned "pebble" (= the teleportation rune to the Haven):
"...one of the deckhands found it just outside..."

While Marvin's statement "He and his bunch threw themselves at me." is true for the violent approach to "Blood Money" (where you provoke and get rid of Coyote and his "bodyguards") the line that preceeds it is not:
"He sent one of his men after me."

This only happens as a result of asking too many questions (2 times, I believe) during the other non-violent approach where Marvin ultimately ends up handing over the payment for the delivery.

Just taking "He sent one of his men after me." out of the dialogue with Cortez should fix it, although it probably would cause a conflict with the spoken Polish voice over still containing and saying the line?

A better alternative to how it's currently worded, I think?:
"...payment for the latest batch of goods."


"it's not necessary" is kind of a stilted way to put it, how about this instead:
"If you have doubts because of Antonio, there's no need."


Should be present tense, "deserve", if I'm not mistaken:
"I think we all deserve a few gold coins..."

To be more consistent with the other dialogue options' descriptions, maybe drop the indefinite article ("a")? Since it's the only strange coin in Marvin's possession replacing "a" with "the" would also make sense:
"(Show strange coin)"
or
"(Show the strange coin)"


If Marvin is supposed to refer to Antonio "not being very well" (as per the preceeding line by Coyote) with his well-wishing follow-up and handing over the money, I think it's better put this way:
"In that case, all I can do is wish him a rapid recovery."


"A wise, specific man." also doesn't sound nor read like a natural thing to say in everyday conversation. I also am not sure how else one could put it differently, maybe:
"A smart, assertive man." (as in a person that's "taking care of business")?

The other line sounds and reads a bit too contrived as well, how about:
"Doing business with people like you is a real pleasure."

No idea what Coyote saying "let me lose" here is supposed to mean? Tried to track down the original line in Polish but since this is part of an additional optional dialogue it didn't come up.
Maybe in the context of Coyote wanting to come across as unaffected and not particularly bothered by Cortez's order for Marvin to not give in to any demands for more money than what was negotiated? If that's the case then it should rather be something along the lines of:
"Well, I'll let it pass."

Followed by, what I think would be worded a little better than "we'll add more later":
"...we're going to charge more the next time!"


Should be "though", not "tough":
"...no other option, though, I'll pay."


Antonio being "deep in the cave" is putting it a little too dramatically, instead I'd propose:
"...but he was too far back in the cave..."

Should be present progressive "confirming" instead of "confirms", "Scoundrels' Haven" is missing the definite article ("the") and since it's one confirmation/proof/receipt it's singular "it" instead "them":
"Document confirming payment of the supply to the Scoundrels' Haven.
I got it from Coyote."


Missing the definite article:
"...price increase for the merchandise..."


Considering that besides hunting I can't think of any (regular) occupation or job one would have in a swamp (woodcutter too, maybe), "making it look like an accident at work" seems a rather unrealistic thing to say, just "accident" should do it as well:
"Make it look like an accident..."

"Scattering something around something or somebody" is probably the better (correct, even?) choice instead of "at":
"Scatter some gold and other things around the place and the body."