Posted January 26, 2011
Not getting into the whole debate or commenting on the review here. Anyway, I hope you're not implying sentence fragments should be avoided at all costs, Serpan. ;)
I write both non-fiction and fiction, so sentence fragments are fine as long as they're used right.
(Anyways, have only skim-read the thread and I have no idea what you're referring to. So, don't really take this as though it's aimed at you. Just at people in general really.)
One thing I do agree on though is that there is a tendancy to correct people's grammar etc. on a forum. I like correct spelling but I'm not too bothered about the grammar being perfect on forum posts and such as long as I can read what's said. Articles are a different matter though.
(One thing I would note however is that a few words feel like they're missing in the second paragraph of the review. But it's easy to understand what's meant. So, no biggie really. If you ask me, people are making a mountain out of a molehill. I did dislike the spoiler though in the review about the first game's ending. I'm on chapter 9 of the first game at the moment.)
PS: Absolutely jealous of people who have Dead Space 2. ;) I'm going to have to wait due to writing not going so well and being skint due to that. I did try the demo of the game on the PS3 though and while I felt it was an improvement on the first game, I didn't like having to stomp enemies for credits and ammo. I can see that getting a bit old after a while.
I write both non-fiction and fiction, so sentence fragments are fine as long as they're used right.
(Anyways, have only skim-read the thread and I have no idea what you're referring to. So, don't really take this as though it's aimed at you. Just at people in general really.)
One thing I do agree on though is that there is a tendancy to correct people's grammar etc. on a forum. I like correct spelling but I'm not too bothered about the grammar being perfect on forum posts and such as long as I can read what's said. Articles are a different matter though.
(One thing I would note however is that a few words feel like they're missing in the second paragraph of the review. But it's easy to understand what's meant. So, no biggie really. If you ask me, people are making a mountain out of a molehill. I did dislike the spoiler though in the review about the first game's ending. I'm on chapter 9 of the first game at the moment.)
PS: Absolutely jealous of people who have Dead Space 2. ;) I'm going to have to wait due to writing not going so well and being skint due to that. I did try the demo of the game on the PS3 though and while I felt it was an improvement on the first game, I didn't like having to stomp enemies for credits and ammo. I can see that getting a bit old after a while.
Post edited January 26, 2011 by DavidGil