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Posted August 10, 2012
I am a native speaker. 22 years in the States kind of qualifies, right? :D
Posted August 10, 2012
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JudasIscariot: I am a native speaker. 22 years in the States kind of qualifies, right? :D
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Lexor: Rodzaju is already helping me but as I said "the more opinions the better" so I'll PM you too if you still want to help me :) Thanks. :)
Sure, shoot me a PM :D
Posted August 10, 2012
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sauvignon1: Could I take a look? I'm born and raised in the USA, so my English is about as good as it's ever going to get.
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Lexor: Thank you both for the offer. It seems that two helpers I already have, gave me so many things to think about that anyone more would make my head hurt :D But if you want I can still send you these sentences to look at or you can just wait for page to go online. :)
At least you got both varieties of English: UK English and US English to look through :D
Posted August 16, 2012
"In addition" needs a comma after addition :D

"With use of my own or the client's material I am able to create a variety of DTP" there's a comma missing between material and I.

" cordially invite you to familiarize yourself with small part of my portfolio which can be found on this page" should be an " a " (without quotes) between with and small :D.
Posted August 17, 2012
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Lexor: I'm so sorry for my lack of response - lately I am a little busy :(

Thank you all above for your comments!

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saramakos: While technically correct, "a great number of years" sounds a little awkward, perhaps "many years"? That's purely personal opinion of course :)

Also, cordially doesn't seem like an issue to me, but I guess that also comes down to taste. It is moderately formal, but does seem to fit the context.
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Lexor: "many years" sounds as a good replacement :)
"cordially" - phew :D

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JudasIscariot: "In addition" needs a comma after addition :D

"With use of my own or the client's material I am able to create a variety of DTP" there's a comma missing between material and I.

" cordially invite you to familiarize yourself with small part of my portfolio which can be found on this page" should be an " a " (without quotes) between with and small :D.
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Lexor: All your comments sound nice - thank you!
Glad to help :D
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