Posted on: November 29, 2018
Hakuso3
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So many questions left unanswered...
I liked it. A lot. I definitely want to see more of this. As to this part (it was supposed to be a trilogy) alone it took me seven hours to read through it, so it's not one of the "quickies" you're finished with in under two hours, but then I was taking my time letting the animations finish rather than speed reading so I'm sure you can blow through this MUCH faster than I did if you work at it. I'm kinda torn on the recommendation front since I don't even see a projected release date for the second or third part. If this keeps going I'll definitely be picking up the rest of it, and recommending others take a look at it as well, but I'm kinda paranoid about how many things just end without ever finishing the story. The only complaint I have is that they could *REALLY* do with toning down the fight scenes. They try too hard to describe them and it doesn't work quite as well as I think they thought it would. It ends up seeming overly verbose, not that relevant, and distracts from the story. Tone them down, don't over-narrate the fights, and the only thing wrong with this chapter will be infinitely better in the other two parts. Four stars for an interesting story and decent length, only losing one for the aforementioned fight scenes being excessively wordy to the point of being annoying, but they're a small part of the VN so it's mostly something you can ignore as it's not a Victor Hugo level of excessive details throughout the entire story.
вам это показалось полезным?
