Posted September 24, 2014
Having played through the game with the commentary on, I think there's another problem; the designer Dave Gilbert said that an important theme was supposed to be that the members of the Grace Group had "skipped" the experiences that lead them to their "destinations" in life and were "weak" because of that. Madeline directly says their souls are weak, but I don't think it comes through in any other way.
Lia's whole story is one of being panicked because of the threat of spiritual annihilation. Her choices don't work out very well, but I don't see how she's weak or why. Peter had a blind-spot regarding his father but the conclusion of that story reveals that he was simply ignorant and from long before he went to the Grace Group. Heather has trouble reconciling her past but surely she would have that problem anyway; it's because prostitution is illegal and considered shameful that she had this problem. When forced to confront it she actually processes it pretty easily.
Michael does so little in the story I don't think we can get any insight into his personality and we know nearly nothing about the other members of the group.
I don't think this intended theme comes through at all and ends up just being a plot device to allow these characters' ghosts to be eaten.
Lia's whole story is one of being panicked because of the threat of spiritual annihilation. Her choices don't work out very well, but I don't see how she's weak or why. Peter had a blind-spot regarding his father but the conclusion of that story reveals that he was simply ignorant and from long before he went to the Grace Group. Heather has trouble reconciling her past but surely she would have that problem anyway; it's because prostitution is illegal and considered shameful that she had this problem. When forced to confront it she actually processes it pretty easily.
Michael does so little in the story I don't think we can get any insight into his personality and we know nearly nothing about the other members of the group.
I don't think this intended theme comes through at all and ends up just being a plot device to allow these characters' ghosts to be eaten.