Anyway, currently, it's a tie! Both Tallima and Detlik have 2 votes. So, which one do I choose?
Tallima's work was technically perfect, while Detlik did have quite a few hiccups here and there, both in storytelling, style, and grammar. But that's to be expected: Tallima writes books. Detlik has written his first few stories.
Detlik's story have hit a weak spot of mine with his exploration of the unknown, and even thou it's not perfect, you can feel his enthusiasm from every word.
Tallima made me think, he made me wonder about his story. And that is something I always value.
I ... I don't know. I really, really don't. Really, it's 50:50. However, I do believe Tallima's work is already appreciated by many, so it's only fair to give my vote to Detlik. I'm sorry, Tallima, and do know that I really liked what you have written.
Anyway, Detlik - contact me on Steam or Skype and we'll talk about those games I now owe you, all right?