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I am recreating my webpage and also it would have its English version. I have translated page introduction into English but (as it is not my first language) it could be good if English native speakers / teachers could take a look at it just to check if my translation is ok and does not sound "weird". There are around 10 sentences. The page is not fully online yet, so I will use PM. Anyone around who is able to help me? :) The more opinions the better :)

EDIT: Thank you all for your offers and opinions. I've already got the help I needed - thank you Rodzaju and JudasIscariot :) I'll let you all know when my page goes online for final adjustments :)
Post edited December 23, 2012 by Lexor
I am a native speaker. 22 years in the States kind of qualifies, right? :D
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JudasIscariot: I am a native speaker. 22 years in the States kind of qualifies, right? :D
Rodzaju is already helping me but as I said "the more opinions the better" so I'll PM you too if you still want to help me :) Thanks. :)
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JudasIscariot: I am a native speaker. 22 years in the States kind of qualifies, right? :D
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Lexor: Rodzaju is already helping me but as I said "the more opinions the better" so I'll PM you too if you still want to help me :) Thanks. :)
Sure, shoot me a PM :D
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Lexor: I am recreating my webpage and also it would have its English version. I have translated page introduction into English but (as it is not my first language) it could be good if English native speakers / teachers could take a look at it just to check if my translation is ok and does not sound "weird". There are around 10 sentences. The page is not fully online yet, so I will use PM. Anyone around who is able to help me? :) The more opinions the better :)
How about a link? :P
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Licurg: How about a link? :P
Sure, but:
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Lexor: The page is not fully online yet
;) So there is not much to see online (yet). It *should* be much more during next week, maybe even at the end of this weekend.
Post edited August 19, 2012 by Lexor
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Licurg: How about a link? :P
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Lexor: Sure, but:
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Lexor: The page is not fully online yet
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Lexor: ;) So there not much to see online (yet). It *should* be much more during next week, maybe even at the end of this weekend.
Here is the link:
I'll take a look next week, and PM you if you've done anything wrong :P


EDIT: PM me those 10 lines :)
Post edited August 20, 2012 by Licurg
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Lexor: I am recreating my webpage and also it would have its English version. I have translated page introduction into English but (as it is not my first language) it could be good if English native speakers / teachers could take a look at it just to check if my translation is ok and does not sound "weird". There are around 10 sentences. The page is not fully online yet, so I will use PM. Anyone around who is able to help me? :) The more opinions the better :)
Could I take a look? I'm born and raised in the USA, so my English is about as good as it's ever going to get.
Post edited August 10, 2012 by sauvignon1
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Licurg: PM me those 10 lines :)
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sauvignon1: Could I take a look? I'm born and raised in the USA, so my English is about as good as it's ever going to get.
Thank you both for the offer. It seems that two helpers I already have, gave me so many things to think about that anyone more would make my head hurt :D But if you want I can still send you these sentences to look at or you can just wait for page to go online. :)
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sauvignon1: Could I take a look? I'm born and raised in the USA, so my English is about as good as it's ever going to get.
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Lexor: Thank you both for the offer. It seems that two helpers I already have, gave me so many things to think about that anyone more would make my head hurt :D But if you want I can still send you these sentences to look at or you can just wait for page to go online. :)
At least you got both varieties of English: UK English and US English to look through :D
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JudasIscariot: At least you got both varieties of English: UK English and US English to look through :D
Yes, and to think "they should be so similar!" lol :D
If you need help with "Australian English" let me know... :)
I am often accused of being overly picky with spelling and grammar!
English teacher here in Japan.
In America it's called a truck.
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RangerSolo: English teacher here in Japan.
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saramakos: If you need help with "Australian English" let me know... :)
I am often accused of being overly picky with spelling and grammar!
Thank you for your offers. :) There is not so much left to check translation now but after page goes officially online (soon, I hope) I will gladly hear your opinions :)
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StingingVelvet: In America it's called a truck.
What's called a truck?
Post edited August 10, 2012 by Lexor